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Post by Mizuno Ryou on Dec 25, 2012 1:57:02 GMT -5
| [atrb=style, padding: 5px][atrb=border,0,btable][atrb=style,background-color: #E3E3E3,true] | Name: Unkagensou [Haze Illusions] Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Description: Name: Chinyuu [Forced Entry] Element: N/A Type: Genjutsu Rank: D Description: Name: Enshi [Death by Smoke Suffocation] Element: N/A Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Description: Name: Teikan [Clear Vision] Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Description: Name: Haini [Burning Up] Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Description: Name: Nebou [Sleeping in Late] Element: N/A Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Description: |
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Post by Admin on Dec 25, 2012 15:36:17 GMT -5
Unkagensou [Haze Illusions] This is ninjutsu, and Katon, right? Teikan [Clear Vision] This should be a B-rank Technique. However, you could consider just separating it. Make releasing the clear smoke one ninjutsu (B-rank) and then casting the genjutsu (D-rank) a second technique. Choushou [Funeral Bells] This jutsu seems a bit pointless... once the target has inhaled your chakra you have infiltrated their chakra circulatory system and can use your genjutsu on them. Then what's the purpose of the bells? You really don't need them. Your specialty seems to be with smokes not bells as well, so idk, I just don't see a purpose. Haini [Burning Up] B-rank, and you should note that in most cases the pain will awaken them from the genjutsu, but being that it's fire it should cause some damage first. Nebou [Sleeping in Late] Being that this technique can attack multiple targets simultaneously, mod it to an A-rank technique. |
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Post by Mizuno Ryou on Dec 25, 2012 15:40:39 GMT -5
I guess that the only way for Unkagensou to really make sense - for it to be smoke - is for ninjutsu & katon, so I'll fix that.
For Teikan, I don't really understand what you mean about separating the techniques? Should I do that for it to be more clear? Sorry, I'm just a bit confused.
Removed Choushou, changed Haini and Nebou.
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Post by Yamanaka Ino on Dec 25, 2012 16:01:14 GMT -5
Creating the smoke is ninjutsu, and casting the genjutsu through the chakra laced in the smoke is (obviously) genjutsu. Thus creating the clear smoke could be a ninjutsu separate from the actual ninjutsu. Then you could cast any of your genjutsu through the clear smoke as well once you get it.
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Post by Mizuno Ryou on Dec 25, 2012 17:02:43 GMT -5
Ah, okay, I get what you're saying now, so I should switch Unkagensou as well, to just be a technique that releases the smoke - then have a genjutsu technique that manipulates the chakra within it to create an illusion. Is what I have up now better?
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Post by Yamanaka Ino on Dec 25, 2012 17:56:43 GMT -5
Once you make Teikan B-rank I'm ready to approve.
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Post by Mizuno Ryou on Dec 25, 2012 18:08:06 GMT -5
Woops, thought I'd done that. Fixed!
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Post by Admin on Dec 25, 2012 18:38:19 GMT -5
Approved.
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